tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post1267730032707147701..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: Laughing All the WayKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-70666205761317353622015-03-27T11:41:57.714-07:002015-03-27T11:41:57.714-07:00This was a truly awesome story. I also didn't...This was a truly awesome story. I also didn't mind the info dump because the story was so emotional and just wonderful. Congrats to Shelley.Patnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-4445598365397163642015-03-26T10:10:46.020-07:002015-03-26T10:10:46.020-07:00I loved this story, too. I didn't really noti...I loved this story, too. I didn't really notice the info dump too much, I guess. And I agree a black moment wasn't needed. I think the black moment had occurred when the son came home from Afghanistan, and now the dad is recognizing how that was overcome. It was a beautiful story.Sandy Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11920692341258066387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-81044841173954439772015-03-26T04:02:07.464-07:002015-03-26T04:02:07.464-07:00In total agreement, Kate, this was a real winner f...In total agreement, Kate, this was a real winner for me. You're right, the conversation between the two leads who already knew the info was a slight snag but so deftly handled that I forgave the author completely. Totally luvverly story.Chrisnoreply@blogger.com