tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post1933793851078536583..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: Picture PerfectKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-57890658203510365272014-02-13T16:41:47.998-08:002014-02-13T16:41:47.998-08:00This sounds like an interesting read. I'm afra...This sounds like an interesting read. I'm afraid I missed this one. Would it be possible to see a copy of it? Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-63021933289034261642014-01-23T08:11:11.501-08:002014-01-23T08:11:11.501-08:00Yes, this story had a few bumps, like the word rep...Yes, this story had a few bumps, like the word repetition, but overall it was a sweet, typical WW "first meet" story. I'd have liked it better if the characters had shown more interest in each other in the antique store. I just re-read it, and noticed that Nathan ran out like the building was on fire! And they only got together again because of a huge coincidence.<br /><br />As for your question about structure, Kate, I use a very simple one for these short-shorts. Introduction, Black Moment, and Resolution. Sometimes they publish stories that don't have a black moment. I don't think it has to be huge or dramatic, but I like these stories better when they have one.Betsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03861482447169647656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-27762454542930636852014-01-23T01:25:44.347-08:002014-01-23T01:25:44.347-08:00This was pleasant but not that memorable for me. I...This was pleasant but not that memorable for me. I found the repetition of the word 'table' at the start of the story, (she saw the table, she walked towards the table, she reached the table) irritating and a waste of words. A nice enough storyline but just a bit lacking in its execution, to my mind.Chrisnoreply@blogger.com