tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post2727043491484627738..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: A Comfy Kind of Love by Nell MusolfKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-50168590286922626232016-05-17T12:13:21.601-07:002016-05-17T12:13:21.601-07:00I laughed when I read this because my wife's f...I laughed when I read this because my wife's favorite Italian restaurant in her hometown of Erie PA was...Ricardo's!<br /><br />I liked the story, too, especially the warm, natural dialogue that made it easy to visualize these two. My only criticism is that the writer has the protagonist stand up twice at the end ("I got to my feet." Then a couple of paragraphs later, "I stood up.") That was a little distracting.Joe Allisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05678378293620593593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-66402407356073455802016-05-04T10:11:42.348-07:002016-05-04T10:11:42.348-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sonya Akilahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11458892506403601342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-64169534616469983172016-05-04T05:44:51.793-07:002016-05-04T05:44:51.793-07:00I was jealous when I read this . . . never had any...I was jealous when I read this . . . never had any luck with a couple story. It's a fine line between having a dull storyline and a problem that's too "heavy" for WW, but the author got it just right.Betsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03861482447169647656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-67541227633598641552016-05-03T20:40:34.881-07:002016-05-03T20:40:34.881-07:00I also loved this story. I am thinking that resta...I also loved this story. I am thinking that restaurant is a very expensive one. They probably have pasta other days, but it isn't fancy! I like trying to write stories about already married couples, so I love it when WW has one.Sandy Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14446522151228936911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-73327543136022270372016-05-03T20:06:36.725-07:002016-05-03T20:06:36.725-07:00I loved this story. I wondered about their dinner-...I loved this story. I wondered about their dinner-out budget, too. Maybe this favorite restaurant was high end and costly. Really sweet story, Nell.Mary Jonoreply@blogger.com