tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post3204917932973805881..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: Sleepless in CincinnatiKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-56359195849300120862015-02-11T09:33:26.938-08:002015-02-11T09:33:26.938-08:00I liked this story, but I was puzzled by the fairy...I liked this story, but I was puzzled by the fairy land ending. Were the two of them nailed down to this town? In anything like real life even in WW, I think he would have taken the job and asked her to go with him. Of course, she would.Mary Jonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-52573443630865463712015-02-10T10:55:11.693-08:002015-02-10T10:55:11.693-08:00Bettye, now I have to go back and look. I also no...Bettye, now I have to go back and look. I also noticed the present tense, but now I have to see the change at the end.<br /><br />Kate, I loved this story also for the romantic emotional moments you mentioned.<br /><br />Great setup for a wonderful story.Patnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-56625904801655073092015-02-10T02:40:09.612-08:002015-02-10T02:40:09.612-08:00Darn! I noticed the present tense, but didn't ...Darn! I noticed the present tense, but didn't catch the change in tense at the end.bettye griffinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04457387770524295498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-31880173673672653632015-02-09T12:25:23.271-08:002015-02-09T12:25:23.271-08:00Sounds like it is at least a little different than...Sounds like it is at least a little different than we've been seeing lately.Sandy Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11920692341258066387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-35368447973329770662015-02-09T01:05:44.012-08:002015-02-09T01:05:44.012-08:00Bang on review, Kate. Loved this one, although I w...Bang on review, Kate. Loved this one, although I wouldn't have been letting him leave after that kiss, he'd have been hauled through the door to make up for lost time. But this is WW-land, so he goes home. Lovely story, though. Deserved its place in the mag.Chrisnoreply@blogger.com