tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post321639549090333883..comments2024-03-27T16:11:01.843-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: A Real PrinceKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-25963267619394348302014-07-02T06:35:41.991-07:002014-07-02T06:35:41.991-07:00Who among us hasn't wanted to be a princess a...Who among us hasn't wanted to be a princess anyway? Kate Willoughbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-26785149605649478782014-06-28T22:44:04.457-07:002014-06-28T22:44:04.457-07:00I loved the little girl's reaction to the prin...I loved the little girl's reaction to the princess. Cute story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17247223865019554184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-26471626545266537142014-06-28T17:11:38.586-07:002014-06-28T17:11:38.586-07:00I loved the theme of this story and how well writt...I loved the theme of this story and how well written it was. The characters were so cute it made me giggle.Patnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-53938522258337672492014-06-28T00:22:43.989-07:002014-06-28T00:22:43.989-07:00My thoughts, exactly, Melanie - I'd have liked...My thoughts, exactly, Melanie - I'd have liked to have seen the princess changing her own tyre, too. And I'm sure the same theme was used not too long ago. But the timing in the magazine isn't down to the writer and it was nicely written with a good feel to it, so I could see why they couldn't say no.Chrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-5138651487584303132014-06-27T05:52:37.783-07:002014-06-27T05:52:37.783-07:00I thought this was a cute set up; especially the d...I thought this was a cute set up; especially the daughter sort of being in awe that they picked up a princess. I guess part of me wants a little surprise in these "rescue me" stories. Wouldn't it be fun if, decked out like a frilly Cinderella, she was wrenching off lug nuts like a pro when he pulls over? <br /><br />All in all, I enjoyed this story.<br /><br />MelanieMelanie Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17176767091301717002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-21405460295373135122014-06-25T14:04:49.679-07:002014-06-25T14:04:49.679-07:00I think this is a clever story. I like the bad luc...I think this is a clever story. I like the bad luck turning into something good and the last line brings it all together. "I have to fix your coach" is the cutest. The editor in me (such as it is) had a problem with the second paragraph. I would have taken out "carefully". It's redundant and I don't like "care" being repeated in two consecutive lines. It may have been written by the editor, but if not, it should have been corrected by the editor, in my opinion.Tamaranoreply@blogger.com