tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post4603631850777442151..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: Second Chance at Love by Diane CrawfordKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-44613247425377709782016-09-16T12:19:57.033-07:002016-09-16T12:19:57.033-07:00Great story, Diane. Great editing, Patricia. I l...Great story, Diane. Great editing, Patricia. I loved it.Patnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-57241170661637377782016-09-14T19:10:40.978-07:002016-09-14T19:10:40.978-07:00It seems there are editors who choose to "aug...It seems there are editors who choose to "augment" a story with changes that simply reflect their own personal taste. Then we have Patricia who knows how to enhance the material she is editing. I would say she has the magic touch.Mary Jonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-66782477993545964182016-09-14T18:18:23.877-07:002016-09-14T18:18:23.877-07:00I have to give Patricia the credit for the last pa...I have to give Patricia the credit for the last paragraph in my story -- it worked very nicely. Much better than the lines I wrote!Dianenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-61750086684604751242016-09-14T16:03:15.795-07:002016-09-14T16:03:15.795-07:00This is a cute, well written story. I enjoyed it....This is a cute, well written story. I enjoyed it.Sandy Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14446522151228936911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-91646410276770464382016-09-14T11:53:11.106-07:002016-09-14T11:53:11.106-07:00I like the last line regarding "good growing ...I like the last line regarding "good growing conditions". It's a great metaphor and brings the story together nicely.Tamaranoreply@blogger.com