tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post6182923828135366145..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: Music of Hope by Tina RadcliffeKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-54072651833849226652016-04-16T07:21:41.332-07:002016-04-16T07:21:41.332-07:00I thought this was a cute story. I assumed the gr...I thought this was a cute story. I assumed the grandmother was paying for the piano lessons just to keep the kid occupied, or as a fix-up for the Dad, or both. LOL <br /><br />Of course, now I'll go back and check it against the review. I love it when reader see things I don't as it makes me a better writer.Patnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-80663510179720731752016-04-14T14:41:12.703-07:002016-04-14T14:41:12.703-07:00I thought it was a cute story. I noticed it took ...I thought it was a cute story. I noticed it took place on a few different days rather than all at once like many of the stories do. I like seeing it develop a bit.<br /><br /> I agree with you about being confused on where they lived. I did not realize they lived in the same apartment building. When they found the dog, I figured it was going to belong to the piano teacher, but thought that would be too much of a coincidence when I didn't realize they were neighbors. As for the piano lessons, it sounded to me like Josh had just not met the piano teacher, but then it did sound like he wasn't aware Jake was taking lessons. Maybe the grandmother is paying for them, or Josh will be surprised when he gets a bill! <br /><br />Yes, I am also hungry for lasagna.Sandy Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14446522151228936911noreply@blogger.com