tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post7275390813968501119..comments2024-03-28T07:57:20.138-07:00Comments on Writing for Woman's World Magazine: Wooed and WonKate Willoughbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08923324775303769386noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-33214558591826055972013-12-04T06:31:40.888-08:002013-12-04T06:31:40.888-08:00Thanks, Sandra! There's a fine line between ma...Thanks, Sandra! There's a fine line between making your hero self-deprecating and wimpy. I always want the guy to seem strong, but in a sweet way, you know? And that's not to say that the woman shouldn't make the first move once in awhile either!Mary Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00947204195242982339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-62305961054027156102013-12-04T04:58:57.367-08:002013-12-04T04:58:57.367-08:00I really like your hero and the story. I like his...I really like your hero and the story. I like his self-deprecating ways and his sense of humor.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07894569417895075992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-8568348394392101472013-12-03T06:49:04.150-08:002013-12-03T06:49:04.150-08:00Thanks, everyone! This story got me back in the sw...Thanks, everyone! This story got me back in the swing again after a short break. I wasn't so sure about it, but glad it seemed to please. <br />--Mary AnnMary Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00947204195242982339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-5428929987566868692013-12-03T06:25:24.485-08:002013-12-03T06:25:24.485-08:00The word for Mary Ann's stories is "delig...The word for Mary Ann's stories is "delightful," and this one doesn't disappoint. Keep them coming, Mary Ann!Betsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03861482447169647656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-87180888177443413482013-12-02T05:49:15.256-08:002013-12-02T05:49:15.256-08:00I loved Trey's gentle humor...really good stor...I loved Trey's gentle humor...really good story! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03279233256803317528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-87227771972808870702013-12-01T00:47:46.037-08:002013-12-01T00:47:46.037-08:00Such a well written, lovely story, Mary Ann, it ha...Such a well written, lovely story, Mary Ann, it had success written all over it even before it went into the envelope. I always love a man with a sense of humour and this one's so nice, so sweet and considerate, you know he's going to be a keeper. I always love your stories and this one left me with a warm glow inside.Chrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-91746091055996440082013-11-30T21:14:06.942-08:002013-11-30T21:14:06.942-08:00This was just a great little story. Nice job maki...This was just a great little story. Nice job making us love Trey. It was nice to see a story from a man's POV. The story moved along well and there were several spots that were touching or funny. My favorite line was: "Sometimes he laughed to much when they talked, the good feeling lasted the rest of they day." <br />Yeah, he's smitten all right. Jody E. Lebelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08777207515123248962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-406318704822590967.post-44501343924791340102013-11-30T11:19:44.181-08:002013-11-30T11:19:44.181-08:00I loved, loved, loved everything about this story ...I loved, loved, loved everything about this story from the cute, new premise, to the characters, to the humor. Great job, Mary Ann.Patnoreply@blogger.com