Tagline: Ellie knew no one in town...then she met Danny and Sophie!
Observations: This story is a direct opposite from the story last week. Last week, we had a widow who was at a crossroads. She felt something was missing in her life, but was reluctant to move forward for fear that it would mean saying goodbye to her late husband.
This week, we have a heroine who is completely content. She is on the brink too, but is in a state of happy anticipation, eager to see what life brings her. She's proactive and optimistic.
There's also a time-honored trope here I thought I'd point out - the often-maligned misunderstanding. In the pages of Woman's World, you will often see a story in which a character appears to be married or taken, when in fact, just the opposite is true. Ellie sees a man with a little girl and assumes he's her father. Another variation is seeing someone with a person of the opposite sex--walking together, shopping, kissing a cheek or hugging, driving in the same car--the possibilities are endless. It's natural to assume they might be a couple. You will also see a heroine jump to conclusions if the hero is doing something to suggest he's a parent. Maybe there's a carseat in his car, he's carrying a shopping bag from a toy store, he shopping in the children's section of the bookstore.
Regardless of how they come to the conclusion that the person is married/attached, obviously the truth must be found out. Here Ellie hears the girl call him "Uncle Danny."
Photo credit: Sebastien Launay (cc)
This was a cute story. I also liked how confident and content the heroine was.
ReplyDeleteI loved this story. So upbeat and believable. Thanks for all the trope ideas, Kate.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know Frisbee was a school sport now. I see they are back in the park and again mistaking uncle for dad. The story the next week does the same thing. This was a nice story, but I must say I prefer those that show a little more originality. Also, I would like to see a lot more romance.
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ReplyDeleteI loved this story..!Thank you for posting this blog.
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I personally find that whole thought-he-was-married-but-turns-out-to-be-the-uncle thing stale and roll my eyes whenever I see it...but that's just me.
ReplyDeleteI liked the Ellie character. She seems open and fun and like someone I'd like to hang out with. Cute story. Thanks for the tips Kate.
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