A Halloween Treat

by Lisa Weaver from the October 27, 2025 issue

Tagline: When Sabrina shows up to cater a party at the old Silverpine mansion, she doesn't expect to be greeted by a host with a smile sharp enough to match his costume--or to feel a spark that's anything but scary.

Off the Cuff Observations: Cinnamon-laced pumpkin cupcakes? Yes, please!! 

Prediction--R.J. Blackthorne is the mysterious new owner of the haunted mansion.

Who doesn't love a cape? (Maybe Edna Mode from The Incredibles.)

Ryder Joven. Ha! Same initials.

Okay, he's taking a raspberry-filled cupcake, but she was making pumpkin... Okay. I'm a little slow on the uptake here. She's a baker, not a full-on caterer. 

Intrigued, Sabrina considered his invitation to partner up in the Halloween festivities. -- Wait, I thought he was inviting her as a guest but I guess I was wrong.

This was a fun, spooky story. I did get a little confused but whatever. I do still think you can't wink dialogue though. 

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A Season for Love

by Melanie Dusseau from the October 20, 2025 issue

Tagline: After a local fall 5K, Adam and Sandra reminisce about their first run together--rekindling memories and discovering a spark that may lead to something more.

Observations: Wow. I haven't read a story so warmly romantic in Woman's World for a long time. Let's look at what makes it so dreamily sigh-inducing.

First, the couple have a history. She's been coaching him as a member of her beginners running group. They respect each other; he is grateful for her encouragement and she admires his determination. This is a good basis for a relationship and readers will mark this in their minds.

Adam's rainbow memory isn't just a couple of sentences. Ms. Dusseau uses quite a few words to set the scene, establish a physical attraction (the ubiquitous sparks), and most importantly, establish Adam being "unquestioningly smitten." Not only that, but we share this "knowing" moment with him...

"Oh, I remember," he replied quietly, with a smile.

This one sentence emphasizes the significance of that memory. So, we're already anticipating an escalation in their relationship, which we get. He asks her out and she accepts.

That's when Dusseau makes a real effort to create a mood, using words and phrases like:

soft rumble

gracing 

leaned into 

cool mist

slow classic love song

gentle kiss

swayed softly

magic

slowed its pace

embers...simmering

By the time the story is over, we're swaying to the music too, wistfully and vicariously living out the moment along with Adam and Sandra. 

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Lucky in Love

by Tanya Schleiden from the October 13, 2025 issue

Tagline: When Tara's pup leads her to a handsome stranger, she's surprised to find out he's her neighbor--and that her dog has a nose for love!

Off the Cuff Observations: While I admire Tara for rescuing a dog, it's a pet peeve of mine when people can't control their dogs. This is why I have tiny dogs. LOL

I get a little confused when he asks her "Do you two live in the complex?" I was under the impression that she was on a longish walk.

Swerving toward the right, Tara detoured over to the deserted playground. Lucky trotted beside her. Nearing the woods trail, Tara knelt... 

They walked down the dirt path. Tara was admiring the sun shining through colorful autumn leaves when Lucky began to walk faster.

To me, this seems like she's some distance from her apartment so when she encounters a man tying his shoes a little while later and he refers to her apartment complex, I think it's an odd assumption.

This is a classic misunderstanding in which a character sees the other character with someone and assumes he/she is married/taken. This is a tried and true trope you can adopt as your own. Usually, this is all the drama there is, but this author threw in a black moment for the dog too, which is so cute. We worry that Lucky will have a problem with Jason's dog, but then we discover it's a beagle and all is well for Tara and Lucky!

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Catching the Artist's Eye

by Kate Fellowes from the October 6, 2025 issue

Tagline: After Lucy Mulligan's volunteer shift at the library, she never imagined she'd have a 'meet-cute' with a handsome man. But when Harry Peters introduces himself, sparks fly...

Observations: It's always good to paint your main character in a good light and Lucy is a volunteer at the library.

Ah, the gentleman is a true gentleman, allowing her to keep the book they both wanted.

Oh! He's the teacher of her next class! Nice twist I didn't see coming.

I have to love Harry. He's so nice! 

There is a pause at the end in the second to last paragraph that I wanted to point out because it really adds to the moment. Indulge me and read the last two paragraphs as is, with the pause, and then read them again skipping over the ellipsis like it isn't there. Do you see what I mean? It adds some emotion to the scene that the story really benefits from. It's kind of crazy how much three dots can do.

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A Pizza Party 'Plus One'

by Jennifer Anne F. Messing from the September 29, 2025 issue

Tagline: When Cerise Campbell hosts her daughter's birthday, handsome single dad Jordan steps in to help...and love is on the menu.

Stream of Consciousness Observations: "They turned onto Iris Lane, which was shaded by trees with leaves in brilliant fall colors." -- I'm interested to see if there's a reason the street is specifically named.

"Oh no!" Macie wailed. "Who will deliver our pizzas?" -- This sounds a tiny bit stilted, especially coming from the mouth of a teen.

Oooh, stovetop popcorn is the BEST.

As he picked up one of the big bowls of popcorn [sic] his strong, muscular arm brushed against Cherise's arm and she felt an unexpected, pleasant tingle in her arm. -- This is an example of why reading your story aloud is a good idea. The word arm is used three times, which is, if you ask me, one too many.

Nice story! I especially liked the laid-back plans for the birthday party. These days with Instagram and Pinterest, I feel like so many people feel pressure to dial up their events. Birthdays should be celebrated, but not all of them require photo-inspired fanfare.

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A Sweet Ride to New Love

by Sandra Smith from the September 25, 2025 issue

Tagline: Izzy arrives at the ocal fair expecting a sweet summer outing with friends. Then she meets Jackson--and sparks fly!

Stream of Consciousness Observations: Sandy really immerses us in the atmosphere of a State Fair. I've been to county fairs and, honestly, they're not my favorite. I don't really like any of the types of rides they have and there are so many people. Once I eat my corn dog and funnel cake, I'm ready to go home. LOL But Sandy's writing allows me to enjoy a fair vicariously.

Rule of thumb: it's never too early for a funnel cake!

I've come across the word Midway twice and the capitalization of it has caught my attention both times. I don't believe this should be capitalized unless you're talking about the island. 

Awww. How can you not fall in love with Jackson when he sacrifices his own comfort for Izzy's obvious enjoyment? I also like how Jackson is unfavorably compared to the ex. We see that Izzy is moving on in a positive direction. 

"How about I take you out for food that doesn't come on a stick from a truck?" -- LOL. 

That's a great ending too. Upbeat and optimistic for the future.

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Reeling in New Love

by Debra McNally from the September 22, 2025 issue

Tagline: When single dad Carter embarks on a fishing trip, he doesn't expect to meet the cabin's charming owner--or to feel a spark.

Stream of Consciousness Observations: We begin with a scent, a wonderful sensory addition to any story. We often forget to describe things other than the sights and sounds.

Frankie is the owner of the cabin. I suspect Frankie is a gal.

Carter found her beauty so captivating and felt an unexpected jolt of excitement. -- Thank you, Debra, for not making it electricity! If we harnessed all the electricity found in Woman's World romance stories, we could power a Tesla. LOL

Ha! I was right. Frankie is a woman. I love being right. However, just because I correctly predicted this misunderstanding, don't think it's not desirable to do so in your own stories. Mistaken identity is a time-honored trope in Woman's World stories.

He recognized this stir of feelings from a forgotten place in his heart--and it surprised him. -- This moment illustrates a necessary characteristic of a "moving on" story. A character moving on from divorce, the death of a spouse or a break-up, must acknowledge or realize that they are ready to move on. This can be backstory, like when you open the story and the character has already made this decision. Or it can occur in the story, like it did here.

I'm not familiar with fishing, so I don't know what a live well is, but it certainly makes it seem like Debra knows, which is important. When you write about a subject, get your facts and details right because there will be readers who will catch your mistakes.

Yeah, I might be the only person in the world who doesn't like s'mores. LOL

Awww, what a heartfelt ending. Love.