by Cher L. Tom from the March 25, 2024 issue
Tagline: After a series of bad dates, Marcie opens up to her friend Max--who might end up being the one she was looking for all along.
Observations: I'm not a huge fan of friends to lovers stories, mostly because I am usually frustrated that the two people are too dense to see they belong together.
I'm an impatient reader, apparently. LOL
However, I really liked Max. He was the best part of this story. His humor...
"Is my hair singed?" he deadpanned.
Hilarious.
He bakes/burns cookies! I mean, come on.
He plays pranks. Love it.
So, in summary, create a really lovable character, one that the reader/editor can't resist either. Make him or her someone you'd like to date.
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2 comments:
I thought this was a cute story with lots of humor. A fun read.
Pat, agreed!
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