by Wendell J. Potter from the June 17, 2024 issue
Tagline: While on their outing to celebrate Father's Day, Anna and her father have two sweet encounters that soon lead to true love.
Observations: I loved seeing Anna and her dad's relationship. Truth in fact, I'm a little jealous. My dearly departed dad and I weren't close.
I think it was awesome to get a twofer, too! Two romances in one story. I've read all of Mr. Potter's stories and I can say with confidence, they are much improved, which just goes to show you practice makes perfect.
Note the omniscient point of view. I'm not the best at writing this POV. I like to be in one character's head or the other's. But it's nice to see that Woman's World is flexible with points of view.
Photo by Rolands Lakis via Flickr CC license
