Tagline: After Lucy Mulligan's volunteer shift at the library, she never imagined she'd have a 'meet-cute' with a handsome man. But when Harry Peters introduces himself, sparks fly...
Observations: It's always good to paint your main character in a good light and Lucy is a volunteer at the library.
Ah, the gentleman is a true gentleman, allowing her to keep the book they both wanted.
Oh! He's the teacher of her next class! Nice twist I didn't see coming.
I have to love Harry. He's so nice!
There is a pause at the end in the second to last paragraph that I wanted to point out because it really adds to the moment. Indulge me and read the last two paragraphs as is, with the pause, and then read them again skipping over the ellipsis like it isn't there. Do you see what I mean? It adds some emotion to the scene that the story really benefits from. It's kind of crazy how much three dots can do.
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