Tagline: Thad had moved to a new town and was lonely...until he met Jennifer
Observations: This story is a perfect example of the type of nice guy hero Woman's World likes. Let's look at a list of Thad's attributes.
As an accountant starting his own firm, he's a hard worker. He's smart too. He's done his research to make sure this new town can support another CPA.
He blushes. And he gets tongue-tied. How cute is that??? LOL
When he sees his chance, he does go ahead and ask if she might help him with his yard. It's okay for our heroes to be shy, but it's also nice to see them have some initiative.
So, when you're creating a hero, it's a safe bet to show us he's a genuinely nice guy. Don't just assume we know it.
I absolutely loved the ending. I'm not sure why. The fact that he is babbling about Jen to his friend is just adorable.
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