Tagline: Izzy arrives at the ocal fair expecting a sweet summer outing with friends. Then she meets Jackson--and sparks fly!
Stream of Consciousness Observations: Sandy really immerses us in the atmosphere of a State Fair. I've been to county fairs and, honestly, they're not my favorite. I don't really like any of the types of rides they have and there are so many people. Once I eat my corn dog and funnel cake, I'm ready to go home. LOL But Sandy's writing allows me to enjoy a fair vicariously.
Rule of thumb: it's never too early for a funnel cake!
I've come across the word Midway twice and the capitalization of it has caught my attention both times. I don't believe this should be capitalized unless you're talking about the island.
Awww. How can you not fall in love with Jackson when he sacrifices his own comfort for Izzy's obvious enjoyment? I also like how Jackson is unfavorably compared to the ex. We see that Izzy is moving on in a positive direction.
"How about I take you out for food that doesn't come on a stick from a truck?" -- LOL.
That's a great ending too. Upbeat and optimistic for the future.
Photo by F. Delventhal via Flickr CC License
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