Tuesday, May 18, 2021

Raindrops and Butterflies


 by Pamela Moran from the May 10, 2021 issue

Tagline: When her childhood crush and neighbor, Todd, comes over to help Abby plant flowers for Mother's Day, love is in full bloom.

Observations: This is another example of how you can rely on oft used Woman's World tropes and still end up with a heartwarming story that the editors love. (And I did love this story, especially the dad and his satisfied smile.) A trope is defined as a common or overused theme or device. I embrace tropes and prefer to think of them as tried and true rather than cliche.

The tropes Moran used were 

  • gardening 
  • a quasi-matchmaker (Did her dad invite Todd over? The author left us guessing.)
  • a helpful man (also known as man to the rescue)
  • a late, beloved family member
  • a post activity piece of pie
Honestly, sometimes I think about making some giant dice out of cardboard, writing tropes on them with sticky notes, then rolling them and challenging myself to write a story using those tropes.

In fact, here's printable pattern for a paper cube in case you think this is a good idea too. 

Photo by Stephanie via Flickr Creative Commons License


3 comments:

Sandy Smith said...

I thought this was a great story. I love how it showed the main character remembering her mother.

Pat said...

I loved this story from the main characters to the Dad. So much character development is such a short space. Cute Mother's Day premise also.

himanshu agarwal said...

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