by Pamela Moran from the May 10, 2021 issue
Observations: This is another example of how you can rely on oft used Woman's World tropes and still end up with a heartwarming story that the editors love. (And I did love this story, especially the dad and his satisfied smile.) A trope is defined as a common or overused theme or device. I embrace tropes and prefer to think of them as tried and true rather than cliche.
The tropes Moran used were
- gardening
- a quasi-matchmaker (Did her dad invite Todd over? The author left us guessing.)
- a helpful man (also known as man to the rescue)
- a late, beloved family member
- a post activity piece of pie
Honestly, sometimes I think about making some giant dice out of cardboard, writing tropes on them with sticky notes, then rolling them and challenging myself to write a story using those tropes.
In fact, here's printable pattern for a paper cube in case you think this is a good idea too.
Photo by Stephanie via Flickr Creative Commons License
3 comments:
I thought this was a great story. I love how it showed the main character remembering her mother.
I loved this story from the main characters to the Dad. So much character development is such a short space. Cute Mother's Day premise also.
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