by Melanie Dusseau from the August 3, 2020 issue
Tagline: While making a surprise tomato delivery to her elderly neighbor, Molly gets a surprise of her own when his dreamy son shows up to greet her.
Observations: I thought this story was summer itself. Check out how she made the season come alive in these quotes.
The early afternoon sun hit the patch of land full-on, warming her face as she tilted it toward the cloudless blue sky.
She placed both palms on the dirt and did something that always delighted her as a child: inhaled the scent of garden tomatoes. The earthy green fragrance bloomed around her and she thought about how happy her neighbor...was going to be when she brought him a basket of his favorite summer bounty.
She mentions cold lemonade. She's wearing cut-offs. There's a porch swing!
Don't forget about just writing a story that's seasonal and not attached to any particular holiday. I think this actually gives you a little advantage in that, once those holiday slots are filled, the editor will turn to stories that have more flexibility as to scheduling. But that's just a theory. :)
2 comments:
Nice, Kate. I agree this was a wonderful, seasonal story. The writer did a great job.
This story really showed how to use description well. It was a great story.
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