by Alyssa Symon from the September 21, 2020 issue
Tagline: When Theo's high school crush returns to town and opens a bakery, it's only a matter of time before he gets a sweet shot of romance.
Observations: This was a solidly written story. My favorite part was...
She smiled--there wasn't a heart in town she couldn't melt with that smile.
What a perfect line.
Also, right after that there's a high pitched voice that says, "Cookie!" and I thought it was the hero! I thought he was so nervous that his voice cracked. I immediately reread that part and realized my mistake.
I also thought it was funny that she thought he was on a stakeout, after last week's story, which really was a stakeout.
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3 comments:
I agree, Kate. Cute sorry, well written.
I also noticed the stakeout thing and thought of the story the week before.
I also thought the hero had said "cookie" in a high-pitched voice and had to read it a couple times. But it was a cute story.
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