by Lisa Weaver from the November 4, 2024 issue
Tagline: As a Halloween enthusiast down on her luck when it came to love, Cassie wasn't expecting to fall head over heels for her handsome client
Observations: I'm constantly surprised at how well the authors can deliver a story that's the same, but different. Maybe my senior brain is malfunctioning, but I can't remember seeing a pumpkin-carving/pet costume contest story before. So, well done, Ms. Weaver.
I also noticed many fall and Halloween turns-of-phrase in her story. Did you catch them all?
"...she was batty about Halloween."
"...the shiver that zizagged down Cassie's spine...had nothing to do with things that went bump in the night..."
"...his gaze as hot as a raging bonfire."
That sort of thing can really help set the scene/mood.
I always enjoy Ms. Weaver's stories.
Photo by William Warby via Flickr CC License
5 comments:
I agree. Another great story from Ms. Weaver.
This was a great story with all the Halloween references. I also had never heard of a pet costume contest. It was different.
Kate, the insight you share on your blog taught me to think outside of the box when I'm plotting a romance. I appreciate all the work you put into reviewing WW stories, and the tips you weave throughout them. Your storytelling wisdom is on point! So thrilled that you, Pat, and Sandy enjoyed it! Thanks for your kind words!
Is this Ms. Weaver? I'm so glad I could help! That's why I've been doing this blog for so long. I very much appreciate the kind words. Knowing that people value what I've been doing motivates me to keep going. :)
Hi Kate! Yes. Lisa here. I didn't realize I hadn't signed into my Google account when I shared my earlier comment. Your blog is a fantastic teaching tool, and I so appreciate the time you invest in it and your thought-provoking insights. Thanks for all you do in support of WW writers and aspiring WW writers. Wishing you and your family a fabulous Thanksgiving.
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