by Beth Pugh from the October 7, 2024 issue
Tagline: As she's about to lose hope for making the night perfect for her niece, Amanda finds help from an old "friend."
Observations: The thing that stood out in this story to me was the heroine. We all know the readership for the magazine skews toward older women, but let's not make the mistake of assuming this demographic expects or wants protagonists to behave as if they were from the 50s.
Yet, it wouldn't be wise to swing the other way and make your heroine the type of woman who doesn't need a man for anything.
So there's a balance you need to achieve. You want your heroine to be strong and capable and confident. But you still want to keep the hero, well, heroic. This story hit the nail on the head.
Amanda is understandably daunted when faced with changing the tire on her own, but she's also resourceful and turns to the internet for help. (However, if it had been my story, I might not have had Amanda pretending everything was fine for her niece. Better to set the example on how to problem solve.) So there's your strong, capable woman at work. And then Jake arrives. He is not pushy and there's no man-splaining, just an honest offer of help.
On a side note, are there still drive-in theatres where you live?
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