by Mary Ann Joyce from the August 10, 2020 issue
Tagline: As she competes against her nemesis, Derek, during a kayaking race, Rosie Joes is surprised to find the tide of her feelings turning into love.
Observations: This story was so funny. I have to admit I'm partial towards humorous stories. Let me go count how many times I wrote "LOL" in the margin.
Okay, I'm back. I laughed five times. That might actually be a record for a Woman's World story.
I liked the kayaking race, something I can't recall seeing in a Woman's World story before. I also liked that little naughty raciness when Rosie caught Derek looking at her backside.
Of course, the story is written by Mary Ann Joyce. She's a master at this.
3 comments:
I agree it was a great story with good action with the kayak race.
I agree, Kate. This is a wonderful story, but as you said it is from Mary Ann Joyce and we expect a great story.
Loved the kayaking setting, loved the characters, and loved the humor.
A story to study for sure.
Thanks, guys! I tried to make the hero a little over-the-top but still likeable. It was a fun story to write.
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