by Cher Tom from the May 17, 2021 issue
Tagline: When a handsome stranger stops into her bakery, Jaycee never expects the sweet treat that his visit has in store for her.
Observations: First of all, congratulations to Cher Tom! I helped her edit this story and I'm thrilled it got published! Woot woot woot!
I think Cher revised it even more after we worked on it together and I love the way she or the editors transformed it from a story about a May Day tradition to a wedding anniversary tradition. Great job.
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Photo by Kimberly Vardeman via Flickr Creative Commons License
3 comments:
Kate, thanks for reminding me that I am three issued behind in my WW reading. I'll be back after I've read this story.
Finally got to this story. I liked it but 'thingly hands' is getting really old.
I enjoyed this story.
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